Writing and editing is once again amateur hour huh. We can't we ever get competent people writing, editing, and directing Star Wars, dammit? 😩
- What an utter waste of Carrie-Anne Moss. I hope she gets flashback scenes but still.
- Why are there no human (hell, Jedi!) escort on prisoner ship with a JEDI MURDER SUSPECT?! Come ON
- Why did Osha split up from the rest going to Torbin, only to arrive at Torbin first, only to have a "oh this looks bad", only to have this immediately dispelled? It really feels completely contrived and useless.
- Why on EARTH are they saying "collaborate and we'll just let you off with a warning" to the poisoner, when they LITERALLY just heard him on a hot mic that he purposefully provided the poison for a murder? In fact, it's when he said this that you decided to "'move in"! HE'S A JEDI MURDER ACCESSORY AND YOU'RE LETTING HIM GO??? WHAT
The last part is the most insane tbh. It makes absolutely no sense. Even if the purpose is to show the Jedi are becoming stupid and completely inept as an institution, this is a level of stupidity from ALL of the present characters that is frankly inexplicable. The guy just said "did the poison work?" and "he will be pleased", he's obviously complicit, you know it, you know Mae is returning so you don't even need his further collaboration, just arrest him FFS 🤦♀️
The fire in the vacuum of space on the trade federation ship bothered me far more than it should have. I guess it's no different than fireballs from exploded ships in space as well, but for some reason I was bugged by what looked like a fire in a fireplace where there is no possibility of flames.
lol this annoyed me too
None of this is smart critique, it's cinema sins level nonsense.
Nah. It affects editing and pacing and when there's a pile of errors and contrived writing like that it adds up into way more. It's not just this one little thing, it's many jarring moments.
The part with the poisoner is completely absurd, surely you can acknowledge that?