Even that is debatable.Itd be pretty easy I think. Sylvando. I dont think theres many others.
Even that is debatable.Itd be pretty easy I think. Sylvando. I dont think theres many others.
That's a different problem I guess. Also when is Morag being made fun off for her uniform?
Yep! That would be Makoto! He was the openly gay guy with a lisp that obsessed over one of his classmates. Everyone was cool with it, but Makoto would snap at the MC because of his relationship with Makoto's crush.
Confused as to why you're confused. By highlighting the poor representations in a relatively niche genre of games, it sheds light on follies that need to be corrected in the future.
Edit: this thread has been very helpful.
You've already mentioned Persona, but Catherine (and by extension, Catherine Full Body, the remake) is um. A little problematic. Even if it's not entirely irredeemable, there's some things that are VERY VERY BAD and should absolutely not be replicated.
Erica is a trans woman with a cool design, and interesting role in the plot. She doesn't particularly fall into any stereotypes, and she's lovely.
Her friends constantly make fun of her, the protagonist included. The general implication that having sex with her is somehow lesser to having sex with a cis woman, and that she somehow tricked someone into it (let's not get into how THAT doesn't make sense), and a major plot point treats her as a dude. Which admittedly in a better written game could have been the point because said plot point is treated as backwards and wrong, but Erica being involved is never called out. Similarly, her friends' transphobia is also never really called out.
...Oh, she's also deadnamed in one ending, then deadnamed in the credits and the artbook, where the creators treat her as a guy and talk about the big reveal, etc.
Pretty bad overall imo, but I know some people like Erica anyway because the character herself is legitimately cool.So this is pretty spotty because I haven't played the game, and I don't plan to, so I'd recommend looking it up yourself. But basically, from what I remember:
The good news. Some of the more problematic lines regarding Erica have been changed. Yay!
The bad news. There's a time travel ending, where the general implication is that Erica has, best case scenario, decided to delay her transition, in what's supposed to be a super duper happy ending for everyone.
And then there's the new character Rin (who I'm going to use they pronouns for because I'm not entirely sure of their specific situation), who's an AMAB character who presents femininely, and is the new romantic route of the game.
The promotional material, and indeed the game's logo, has a lot of "What's in their pants" imagery.
When the protagonist finds out, it's in an unrealistic situation that enforces narratives about trans people hiding their biological sex to have sex with cis people, and he reacts... negatively. (I think he punches them, but I'm honestly not sure)
I think they make up later, but it's a bad setup.
And also they're an alien? Which would normally just be funny, but when it's in THIS game, it's hard not to take that negatively.
She's not made fun of, but her presenting as male/masculine still is played for laughs by other characters either straight up mistaking her for a man, or being outright shocked when they learn she is a woman.
I'd argue that this definitely could be considered an issue for LGBTQ+ people, as since it ridicules the concept of a woman dressing a man, it debases the genuine concerns of trans men and genderqueer people (and butch Lesbians as well).
Compared to shit like Persona or its ilk, it's comparably tame, but it still creates hard borders in regards to gender presentation which is harmful for people who don't conform to what is traditionally masculine/feminine.
He's one of my favorite characters in that game. He's flamboyant but they never rubbed in or pointed out his sexual preference and his character arc is about his fear of whether or not his father who he is as a man and what he wants to do with his life.Itd be pretty easy I think. Sylvando. I dont think theres many others.
Not gonna lie, when I saw the first japanese trailer in a Nintendo Direct I also thought she was a man since there was clearly a male voice over when she showed up briefly.
May have been better to not put any reactions from NPCs to her in the game at all, but isn't it kinda normal to be surprised about reveals like this at first?
I mean, sure, she specifically dresses like a man and presents as one, but I also think that the NPCs' reactions are pretty overblown (I remember Tora going all "A w-w-w-w-w-w-w-WOMAN?!!??!?!!?"God Tora is such a shitty character, and he's a whole chapter of disgusting for a whole plethora of reasons), which is why I feel it's an issue, as it plays up the position that women who present masculine are something shocking and weird, which is even doubly worse considering the designs of the other female characters in the game.
Jun in Persona 2.Itd be pretty easy I think. Sylvando. I dont think theres many others.
iirc the only character that confuses her is Tora that is from another species so he doesnt know how to differentiate humans outside their clothingShe's not made fun of, but her presenting as male/masculine still is played for laughs by other characters either straight up mistaking her for a man, or being outright shocked when they learn she is a woman.
I'd argue that this definitely could be considered an issue for LGBTQ+ people, as since it ridicules the concept of a woman dressing a man, it debases the genuine concerns of trans men and genderqueer people (and butch Lesbians as well).
Compared to shit like Persona or its ilk, it's comparably tame, but it still creates hard borders in regards to gender presentation which is harmful for people who don't conform to what is traditionally masculine/feminine.
Was going to mention that one, it's unbearably bad.didn't enchanted arms have an egregiously stereotypical gay character in the party?
Wow, this really is the game that keeps giving. Disgusting.
Someone didn't read the OP and just read the title assuming things.I'm confused... Why would you actively seek out egregious representations of the LGBTQ community? Isn't that playing directly into the hands of those who hold such disgusting positions in the first place? Especially when there are actual good representations out there in the gaming community that should be pushed to the fore, recognized and celebrated?
We can't exactly ignore the issues that still exist to this day (P5, Catherine). OP has the right idea.I'm confused... Why would you actively seek out egregious representations of the LGBTQ community? Isn't that playing directly into the hands of those who hold such disgusting positions in the first place? Especially when there are actual good representations out there in the gaming community that should be pushed to the fore, recognized and celebrated?
Might have the best battle system ever in a jrpg too.My memory of the game is foggy as well, but Makoto was chill for the most part. He was unfortunate enough to be an openly gay male back in the late 2000s when people could still poke fun at that sort of thing.
Enchanted Arms had a lot going on and yet it's forgotten when people talk about the PS360 era.
Soleil explicitly says she's bisexual in at least one support conversation in the Japanese version; she even says she prefers girls. That's from the Forrest/Soleil support.That's missing a lot of context. Although Soleil is popular with girls, likes praising and teasing them and gets embarrassed when talking with them, she can only have romantic relationships with male characters, who aside from Corrin/Kamui don't need anything like that to make her fall for them. So there's no real "conversion" going on, she is never actually said to be a lesbian. The localized version changed the magical powder for a mental exercise of her imagining the avatar as a girl, and for some reason also wrote out most of her romantic endings with other Male characters (aside from another one that dresses in feminine clothing), which ends up reinforcing implications from that misunderstanding that didn't really exist in the original.
I've beaten the second game's ending in question, so if you really want to know:You've already mentioned Persona, but Catherine (and by extension, Catherine Full Body, the remake) is um. A little problematic. Even if it's not entirely irredeemable, there's some things that are VERY VERY BAD and should absolutely not be replicated.
Erica is a trans woman with a cool design, and interesting role in the plot. She doesn't particularly fall into any stereotypes, and she's lovely.
Her friends constantly make fun of her, the protagonist included. The general implication that having sex with her is somehow lesser to having sex with a cis woman, and that she somehow tricked someone into it (let's not get into how THAT doesn't make sense), and a major plot point treats her as a dude. Which admittedly in a better written game could have been the point because said plot point is treated as backwards and wrong, but Erica being involved is never called out. Similarly, her friends' transphobia is also never really called out.
...Oh, she's also deadnamed in one ending, then deadnamed in the credits and the artbook, where the creators treat her as a guy and talk about the big reveal, etc.
Pretty bad overall imo, but I know some people like Erica anyway because the character herself is legitimately cool.So this is pretty spotty because I haven't played the game, and I don't plan to, so I'd recommend looking it up yourself. But basically, from what I remember:
The good news. Some of the more problematic lines regarding Erica have been changed. Yay!
The bad news. There's a time travel ending, where the general implication is that Erica has, best case scenario, decided to delay her transition, in what's supposed to be a super duper happy ending for everyone.
And then there's the new character Rin (who I'm going to use they pronouns for because I'm not entirely sure of their specific situation), who's an AMAB character who presents femininely, and is the new romantic route of the game.
The promotional material, and indeed the game's logo, has a lot of "What's in their pants" imagery.
When the protagonist finds out, it's in an unrealistic situation that enforces narratives about trans people hiding their biological sex to have sex with cis people, and he reacts... negatively. (I think he punches them, but I'm honestly not sure)
I think they make up later, but it's a bad setup.
And also they're an alien? Which would normally just be funny, but when it's in THIS game, it's hard not to take that negatively.
You clearly haven't played Dragon Quest XI. Drop whatever you're doing and play that masterpiece.
Too bad buying the one JRPG which has a "progressive" LGBT character would also mean financially benefiting a conservative scum who mocks homosexuals on an internet talk show and puts out paid ads in American newspapers denying Japan's war crimes and downplaying the voices of victims.You clearly haven't played Dragon Quest XI. Drop whatever you're doing and play that masterpiece.
Cloud crossdressing is fine. The gag that gay dudes all just wanna rape him, not so much.I wish you all would stop accusing FFVII of homophobia or transphobic. The cross dressing section, especially for 1997, I'd argue was handled pretty well, if not with a little humor. Aeris actively encourages Cloud to do it as if it was nothing. Had Cloud have any semblance of toxic masculinity he wouldn't have gone through or worse. Sure there are some comedic moments inherently from a man who has never cross dressed before and the fact that he's a bad actor.
FFVII, for all its flaws, I don't think deserves flack for this scene.
Whatever it is what it is. Donate money to a pro LGBT charity. The man is almost 90 years old, he won't be around for long. He's old news but the fact that Square didn't give a shit and still wrote in Sylvando has to count for something. That's the future. Sugiyama is the past.Too bad buying the one JRPG which has a "progressive" LGBT character would also mean financially benefiting a conservative scum who mocks homosexuals on an internet talk show and puts out paid ads in American newspapers denying Japan's war crimes and downplaying the voices of victims.
It's like you can't win sometimes! Maybe a deep social problem?
You know as well as I do that that scene was not intended to be taken as "rape". It's a comedic moment that was never intended to be taken as an assault. Cloud doesn't express revulsion even, just surprise.Cloud crossdressing is fine. The gag that gay dudes all just wanna rape him, not so much.
Nah this is bullshit. Square Enix chooses to continue working with him, places importance on the legacy of DQ music over the toxic nature of the man he is today. Does it matter that he's 90 years old if he's still healthy, active, and very contributing negatively to society and using his fame to influence societal norms? The Prime Minister of Malaysia is also over 90, but when he condemns Jewish people and makes homophobic comments it still has a huge impact. Age is not an excuse. Sugiyama will be "the past" when Square Enix stops working with him. It doesn't matter what they put in the games when they continue to profit a man who is acting against the interests of actual LGBT people in Japan. Representation in escapism is worthless when you are put down in the real world.Whatever it is what it is. Donate money to a pro LGBT charity. The man is almost 90 years old, he won't be around for long. He's old news but the fact that Square didn't give a shit and still wrote in Sylvando has to count for something. That's the future. Sugiyama is the past.
Okay man, keep defending Square Enix if it makes you feel better. "See it through the lens of 1997" is more bullshit. Just because it's comedy doesn't mean it's not problematic.You know as well as I do that that scene was not intended to be taken as "rape". It's a comedic moment that was never intended to be taken as an assault. Cloud doesn't express revulsion even, just surprise.
Sure that scene would probably not fly nowadays but we have to see it through the lens of 1997. That's 22 years ago! For the time this was practically being progressive, this entire cross dressing sequence. Cut it some slack.
I agree that it was intended to be a joke, but there's no doubt in my mind it was a rape or molestation joke. It kinda sours me on the entire section of the game to be honest. Now it feels like all of it was intended to be an emasculating joke where we're supposed to laugh at Cloud.You know as well as I do that that scene was not intended to be taken as "rape". It's a comedic moment that was never intended to be taken as an assault. Cloud doesn't express revulsion even, just surprise.
Sure that scene would probably not fly nowadays but we have to see it through the lens of 1997. That's 22 years ago! For the time this was practically being progressive, this entire cross dressing sequence. Cut it some slack.
Thankfully Sugiyama is not a prime minister.Nah this is bullshit. Square Enix chooses to continue working with him, places importance on the legacy of DQ music over the toxic nature of the man he is today. Does it matter that he's 90 years old if he's still healthy, active, and very contributing negatively to society and using his fame to influence societal norms? The Prime Minister of Malaysia is also over 90, but when he condemns Jewish people and makes homophobic comments it still has a huge impact. Age is not an excuse. Sugiyama will be "the past" when Square Enix stops working with him. It doesn't matter what they put in the games when they continue to profit a man who is acting against the interests of actual LGBT people in Japan. Representation in escapism is worthless when you are put down in the real world.
I won't deny that if you analyze it through 2019 eyes that could be inferred but c'mon this is an old ass game from the previous century. You have to cut it some slack and try to analyze it through the lens of 1997.I agree that it was intended to be a joke, but there's no doubt in my mind it was a rape or molestation joke. It kinda sours me on the entire section of the game to be honest. Now it feels like all of it was intended to be an emasculating joke where we're supposed to laugh at Cloud.
??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Citation required lol. As far as I know Square Enix has never said anything negative about Sugiyama or "confronted" any of his views publicly or otherwise. Furthermore no one knows who could possibly replace Sugiyama, because it's not something anyone talks about while Sugiyama is still around.Square has publicly confronted Sugiyama's views before and we know the guy who's probably going to succeed him is not a piece of shit.
Guess what? Every time anyone buys a copy of any Dragon Quest product with music in it, Sugiyama is one of 3 people who get direct royalties from it. Not any of those hundreds of people on the team. Think about that for a moment before making that argument.A team of hundreds slaved away to create an amazing videogame which took years of their lives. Sugiyama is a piece of shi but I'm not letting one rotten apple make the whole apple tree go to waste.
I have always taken Luka as trans-girl since Luka wanted to be born as a girl.
Square HAS done so. Go to the 17:30 mark on this video.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Citation required lol. As far as I know Square Enix has never said anything negative about Sugiyama or "confronted" any of his views publicly or otherwise. Furthermore no one knows who could possibly replace Sugiyama, because it's not something anyone talks about while Sugiyama is still around.
Trails of Cold Steel 1 has Angelica who consistently pervs on women that are practically children despite her being a senior(17/18) and makes no qualms about what their body will be like as they get older but I still like the character and she's decent enough comic relief. Have not finished the game or played the sequel so I don't know if she is redeemed but I can see some people finding her somewhat crude given she hits on anything, and I mean anything that's a woman despite age difference.
Soleil explicitly says she's bisexual in at least one support conversation in the Japanese version; she even says she prefers girls. That's from the Forrest/Soleil support.
Square Enix dropped your standard, limp 'the views of an individual do not reflect the views nor efforts of the entire company' stuff. Basically throwing up their hands and pretending that it's all just Sugiyama's business, and not their own. A meaningless sentiment, since Sugiyama's place in the Dragon Quest franchise makes his baggage impossible to remove from the series. As you said, supporting Dragon Quest unfortunately directly supports Sugiyama and his agenda, and no amount of rationalisations will change that. I'm not going to pull up my nose to anyone that still wish to support the games, but I think it's important that we don't deny the reality of the situation.??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? Citation required lol. As far as I know Square Enix has never said anything negative about Sugiyama or "confronted" any of his views publicly or otherwise. Furthermore no one knows who could possibly replace Sugiyama, because it's not something anyone talks about while Sugiyama is still around.
Guess what? Every time anyone buys a copy of any Dragon Quest product with music in it, Sugiyama is one of 3 people who get direct royalties from it. Not any of those hundreds of people on the team. Think about that for a moment before making that argument.
It's okay to just say that you don't care enough that someone who is anti-LGBT and a war crime denier gets money from every DQ purchase. You don't have to care. But don't try to defend it like there's some logical "out" that can justify it.
Nope. That's a very general statement to try and brush off inquiries to their PR. Please note that there is no mention of Sugiyama or any sort of confrontation as you claimed. The statement doesn't even reference any specific thing that Sugiyama has said. It's pure cowardice and there's nothing to celebrate there.
This is a fan video that speculates about who could replace him. It's speculation from one source which is far from "we know the guy who will probably replace him". It's not even a consensus that DQ fans share, nor has Square Enix spoken about the matter ever.Also at 18:40 they discuss who's supposed to replace Sugiyama. He's called Hayato Matsuo.
It's the same thing Persona 5 does. An attractive adult woman exhibiting qualities of a sexual predator is "okay" because "that's hot" and "he's so lucky" etc. Gross really.It's a cynical choice. Her being a woman makes it more palatable than if it were a male character. She's a vehicle for a certain kind of fanservice.
Is there legitimately no other way to show that I care other than refusing to buy the games? Im honestly asking here. You're accusing me of pretending to care but not caring because I bought a fucking videogame made by a team of hundreds and because one (albeit prominent) terrible guy is getting compensation for it I dont care at all about this issue?Nope. That's a very general statement to try and brush off inquiries to their PR. Please note that there is no mention of Sugiyama or any sort of confrontation as you claimed. The statement doesn't even reference any specific thing that Sugiyama has said. It's pure cowardice and there's nothing to celebrate there.
This is a fan video that speculates about who could replace him. It's speculation from one source which is far from "we know the guy who will probably replace him". It's not even a consensus that DQ fans share, nor has Square Enix spoken about the matter ever.
I don't know why you keep trying to defend Square Enix or excusing their terrible inaction here. Like I said, if you don't care about it, that's fine. But when people bring up legitimate issues with how they handle it, don't defend it like there's some sort of justification. There isn't. It's still okay to buy DQ and not care about a war crime denier making money off it. Most people do that. Most people also just consume their entertainment without feeling the need to defend it. Just don't pretend to care.
Exactly. Go for the games that portray LGBTQ+ characters positively, because everything else either dismisses the community entirely or do a horrible job at it.
There is no way to show that you actually care about this matter when you constantly try to defend Square Enix and Sugiyama with excuses that don't check out at all. Have you noticed that I never once condemned anyone for buying DQ games? It doesn't bother me and I don't judge people for it. I am also okay with people who buy the games and say nothing about this matter because it isn't important to them. What I do have a problem is when people decide to want to defend Square Enix, and use recycled excuses to try to rationalize their actions or reduce their complicity in the matter. Don't do that because you're not Square Enix's PR team, you're not on their payroll, and if you want to do it for free that tells me that your investment in this debate is to tell people who complain that it's "not that bad" or that it "doesn't matter that much". Which shows how little you care about the hurt Sugiyama causes people.Is there legitimately no other way to show that I care other than refusing to buy the games? Im honestly asking here. You're accusing me of pretending to care but not caring because I bought a fucking videogame made by a team of hundreds and because one (albeit prominent) terrible guy is getting compensation for it I dont care at all about this issue?
Surprisingly, I feel like things were better 15 years ago. The Jun romance in Persona 2, Romancing Sa.Ga 2 having a bad-ass genderqueer as the big boss giving zero fucks about the way people talk about them... Not a RPG, but Justice Gakuen dating sim allowed everyone to date everyone regardless of gender too.
Fine, whatever. My stance is basically what Pete Davidson said in this segment of SNL (go to 2:20 for the specific part).There is no way to show that you actually care about this matter when you constantly try to defend Square Enix and Sugiyama with excuses that don't check out at all. Have you noticed that I never once condemned anyone for buying DQ games? It doesn't bother me and I don't judge people for it. I am also okay with people who buy the games and say nothing about this matter because it isn't important to them. What I do have a problem is when people decide to want to defend Square Enix, and use recycled excuses to try to rationalize their actions or reduce their complicity in the matter. Don't do that because you're not Square Enix's PR team, you're not on their payroll, and if you want to do it for free that tells me that your investment in this debate is to tell people who complain that it's "not that bad" or that it "doesn't matter that much". Which shows how little you care about the hurt Sugiyama causes people.
My problem is not people buying DQ games. My problem is that when people point out that supporting DQ directly supports Sugiyama's pocket, some people feel the need to defend it. There is no defending it. Don't even bother trying because defending it in any way makes you look bad.
Honestly, I prefer that the localization made her explicitly bi, instead of the Class S view the Japanese version does. I mean, even ignoring the problematic implications of that view on sexuality, it doesn't have a Western equivalent, so localizing it is the right call.Forrest asks her about how she thinks about men romantically, and she just gives her usual talk about liking cute girls more while being really forward about how cute he is too. However, once it's clear that he's serious about it later in the conversation, her entire attitude changes and she gets really embarrassed, so she clearly didn't take him seriously in the beginning of that conversation when he asked about romance.
Excellent post, and I commend you for it. I'm an academic researcher and can confirm that this caveat is ignored in a lot of the stuff I read, which hinders the conversation about how the be more inclusionary. Basically, people online react with traditionally western viewpoints on Japanese games, which doesn't often lead to change because the company that made the game doesn't understand what it did wrong because it isn't framed in a way they recognize.HERE BE CHARACTER SPOILERS:
Persona 3
has an entire segment on a beach where your protagonists are trying to pick up women; one of them ends up the butt of a joke because they're trans.
Persona 4 - for context, each character's shadow is a manifestation of parts of their personality they repress.
handles sexuality with sensitivity at first (Kanji Tatsumi), but ends up making the potentially-queer male character the object of jokes in pretty much every post-original-release piece of media. At first it's Kanji exploring his sexuality, not wanting to be gay, but accepting that his over-the-top queer shadow is a part of him, that he can be manly while still liking "girly" hobbies, and admitting he's attracted to another character (Naoto Shirogane). Naoto presents as male but is revealed to be female; Kanji maintains a crush on her regardless, meaning that a lot of people read him as pan or bi. Unfortunately, with Yosuke Hanamura--the best friend character--being homophobic... well, he matures throughout the course of the game and stops making fun of Kanji for his potential queerness, but every spinoff/sequel/whatever ends up having Yosuke continue making fun of him/being wary of him due to queerness. For context, though, it's pretty clear that Yosuke was originally intended to be a romance option for the protagonist, who can only be male--there are cut lines that even got English voice acting. Here's a tiny bit more context, too.
Naoto's entire arc can be read as transphobic, too. Her storyline is meant to be a critique of the strict gender roles that Japanese society enacts; Naoto is smart and wants to be a detective, which is a traditionally-male profession. She disguises herself as a man and lives life as a man, with her social link (basically, her side-story) revolving around her exploring her gender and figuring out how to feel comfortable in her own skin as a woman that identifies as a woman but is forced to present as male. Her shadow plays the role of a mad scientist, with a secret lab being the dungeon it runs, and it uses "mad science" as its approach to sex reassignment surgery, which isn't great. It's all because Naoto does NOT want to be a man, but given that reassignment surgery is portrayed as mad science forced upon otherwise-innocent people in Western society, it ends up having some pretty transphobic connotations.
Finally, it does end up revealed that the characters' shadows are less about the person's repression and more about how society views that person; it's a little ambiguous on if the shadows are a hybrid of both or if they're ONLY society's reflection.
Persona 5
has a possible drag queen as the bartender in a (non-explicitly-stated) gay bar that you go to regularly (Lala Escargot), and that character gets to have a full personality... but it also has a pair of predatory gay men (unnamed) who pop up out of nowhere, hit on the protagonist's best friend Ryuji Sakamoto, freak him out, then disappear until suddenly they manage to come up again, creep on Ryuji, and play a comedic role in a trip to Hawaii. Despite the party being on an entirely different continent.
Final Fantasy VII
has a sequence in which you have to cross-dress to get information and rescue a party member captured by, essentially, a Mafia leader that loves to choose sex workers. Part of this segment can involve you going to the Honey Bee Inn, a brothel with a gay area. The gay characters are mostly muscular men, and in one area, they basically force you into a bath with them. Cloud, your protagonist, reacts more with surprise than revulsion or anything, so it's not really played as assault, but it's not exactly great. Here's a rundown of the events that happen in each room of the Inn. The crossdressing itself is played for laughs; the punchline is that Cloud is really bad at acting feminine, rather than the fact that he's cross-dressing to save someone, but it can be read as transphobia for sure. To add to that, Japanese stereotypes of gay men are hyper-macho, especially back in the 1990s when the game came out, which is in stark contrast to the camp stereotype the USA had/has.
A word of caution: I'm guessing you're not Japanese, right? If you are, disregard this, but especially in academia, your framework needs to be well-defined. You're going to be analyzing JRPGs for problematic queer representation from a Western perspective. That needs to be a caveat that's established, or else you're making value judgments on representation and critiques that may have an entirely different connotation in their home culture. A good example of this is my Persona 4 example; while Westerners largely thought of it as highly transphobic, for many Japanese players, it was a progressive critique of systematic sexism. I can't speak for Japanese trans or other queer activists, because I haven't found many translated/English-origin critiques of the game from them and I'm not Japanese or trans. Basically, do what you can to either find Japanese perspectives to synthesize a well-rounded analysis, or make it explicit that this is solely from a Western perspective with Western sensibilities applied to your critique.
As you continue to research, I'd also make sure to note if representation is getting more plentiful/less problematic with time, too; "egregious examples of representation" is a pretty loaded place to start with and frames Japanese developers as inherently queerphobic despite there being good AND bad representation in JRPGs. It's also important to note that just because a piece of media has decent representation in Japan doesn't mean that it's considered progressive; I don't 100% know how it is now, but there used to be a segregation there in which queer television personalities were accepted because they were media personalities, but actual queer individuals were ignored/seen as shameful. There was also a lot of "it's ok because that's the anime genre for it" rather than a true push for representation.
Here's a list of games with LGBT representation, both good and bad. It might be another good starting point. Of particular interest might be Fire Emblem, Megami Tensei/Persona, and Valkyria Chronicles. Most of the games on the list aren't JRPGs.