I might be off my rocker, I might be in my "hot take" phase of digesting the chapter and these things may not be the improvements I think they are, but here's a couple of things:
- Remove the shit with Ymir.
- Remove the stuff with Dina, because it is way undercooked and adds very little, except controversy.
- Either flesh out the convos with other people or just skip out on everyone crying over Eren at the end there. Really, no one but Armin and Mikasa, who still loved him despite everything, should mourn his dumb ass like that.
- That thank you for being mass murderer line should be changed somehow. It could be just a bad translation, but damn.
- Change Historia's words at the end there so she ISN'T suddenly pro-genocide. That way, there's more of a tangible hope of things possibly working out and the peace effort possibly succeeding despite Paradis going Yeager-Nazi out of fear.
- Have Mikasa visit Eren's grave with a child in her arms or something. Goddamn it, she can still hold feelings and regrets over him, but she should have moved on. Why undo her greatest moment at the end of 138 like that.
Some of this might be going too far into straight up retcon instead of working with the ending we were given and I really, really hate the fact that Eren's insanity was swerved into "Code Geass sacrifice" at the end, but hey these are my hot takes.