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Ploid 6.0

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You sure that's a gun and not the cracked asphalt texture right there? hahha

Probably is a gun, white handle design. Need more zoom, tried zooming but twitter won't even let me view the image itself without the boxing.
 
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ibyea

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"I am starting this video from the premise that David Cage is a total hack."

Oh I am already liking this video.
 

Kthulhu

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picking up paint for carl

looking at things

getting on the bus

returning to carl to wake him up

seems like an errand and nothing more

So this is slightly off topic, but why did Markus have to go get paint? Couldn't Carl have gotten the paint delivered somehow? I doubt Amazon doesn't exist 20 years from now, and even if this paint was some how local only, why isn't it being delivered by a store owned Android or a drone or something?

Maybe QD just needed a reason to get Markus out of the house, but to me that lack of world building is kind of lame.
 

dragonbane

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Did anybody else notice this before?

The same cutscene snippet is used if you attack the police and fail which prompts Markus to grab a gun critically wounded. He can then commit suicide or get shot like in the screenshot. Just a small design oversight from re-using that cutscene

So this is slightly off topic, but why did Markus have to go get paint? Couldn't Carl have gotten the paint delivered somehow? I doubt Amazon doesn't exist 20 years from now, and even if this paint was some how local only, why isn't it being delivered by a store owned Android or a drone or something?

Maybe QD just needed a reason to get Markus out of the house, but to me that lack of world building is kind of lame.
It's obviously world building/introduction to his character. If you need a narrative excuse the most sensible one is that Markus enjoys spending time outside. Criticizing that aspect is like a CinemaSins nitpick.
 

Plum

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I will never trust anyone that criticizes with absolute statements. I'll pass on this video.

This post really sounds like the more general equivalent of "Only the Sith deal in absolutes!"

His powers (and that he can convert androids) comes from being a special model developed by Kamski (and he put in the code for deviancy in his and Connors model).

That definitely harms his narrative as it essentially says that, if it weren't for the typical white hipster philosophy-loving sci-fi CEO Kamski. Markus would never have been able to even start his revolution/protest. It's a byproduct of the video's end point on that obscure ending where it's revealed Cyberlife and Kamski orchestrated the whole thing.
 
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4:51: "Why are they guarding their border with gun boats?"

Again, because they aren't allowed admittance in to their country. This is like the most basic of 'research' needed for your video and yet it fails. There is like a flurry of 8 sentences of wrong here.

4:54: "Why is the border guard, a Canadian citizen, swayed by American public opinion of Androids?"

Uh, it's bad writing to assume a citizen of a country could not agree with the laws and rules of their country? Wilm Hosenfeld and Oskar Schindler were literal Nazis and protected Jews. There's nothing subtle about that scene (I didn't have that in my permutation of the game so I'm taking it at face value as presented).

You can barely get through 10 second chunks of this thing without being able to easily refute it and I haven't played the game for weeks.
Indeed. The sad thing is we are so full of cynical critics without talent that love to tear into things half-assed like this video. And then of course emotional children agree just to agree by the dozen. Cage is not the best writer EVER, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.
 
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Indeed. The sad thing is we are so full of cynical critics without talent that love to tear into things half-assed like this video. And then of course emotional children agree just to agree by the dozen. Cage is not the best writer, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.

"Emotional children"

Lmao

Surely you can provide a rebuttal to some of the other examples in the 20 something minute video. Shouldn't be hard given that those agreeing are just emotional children.

We'll wait.
 

Weiss

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Indeed. The sad thing is we are so full of cynical critics without talent that love to tear into things half-assed like this video. And then of course emotional children agree just to agree by the dozen. Cage is not the best writer EVER, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.

You didn't even watch the video.
 

ara

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Indeed. The sad thing is we are so full of cynical critics without talent that love to tear into things half-assed like this video. And then of course emotional children agree just to agree by the dozen. Cage is not the best writer EVER, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.

Wow I thought this thread more or less died but we're back to delivering
 
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You didn't even watch the video.
I watched 5 minutes of the video. Guy sounds like angry cynical hipster tm.

I'm not listening to 25 minutes of this dude. Cage is French, and has a good not great grasp of English and American history, themes, etc. He is getting better at what he does, and the video doesn't seem very constructive.
 

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Indeed. The sad thing is we are so full of cynical critics without talent that love to tear into things half-assed like this video. And then of course emotional children agree just to agree by the dozen. Cage is not the best writer EVER, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.

You wanna try that again but this time withholding the unnecessary insult?
 

Weiss

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I watched 5 minutes of the video. Guy sounds like angry cynical hipster tm.

I'm not listening to 25 minutes of this dude. Cage is French, and has a good not great grasp of English and American history, themes, etc. He is getting better at what he does, and the video doesn't seem very constructive.

If he desn't have a good grasp on American history he shouldn't make a game that liberally references it.
 
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"Emotional children"

Lmao

Surely you can provide a rebuttal to some of the other examples in the 20 something minute video. Shouldn't be hard given that those agreeing are just emotional children.

We'll wait.

Keep waiting. I'm on mobile and this thread is already boring me. I wasn't under the impression I signed a contract to waste my time. Have a nice day.
 
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Lol okay

Typically when engaging in a discussion thread, you actually want to do the "engage in a discussion" bit.

And not just drive by shit post. But you do you.
It wasn't a shitpost. I don't like the tone of the video. I said Cage is an average to good writer. He deserves criticism, but this video is edgy trash to me. Deal with it. I'm not here to engage you personally.

As an English grad and poet, it's easy to be harsh on bad writing. It's everywhere. Detroit is better than previous efforts. I would not call him a hack, just someone struggling to master English. Like a lot of people in art and games.
 

Plum

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Indeed. The sad thing is we are so full of cynical critics without talent that love to tear into things half-assed like this video. And then of course emotional children agree just to agree by the dozen. Cage is not the best writer EVER, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.

Didn't you just say that you don't trust people who deal in absolutes and hyperbole?
 
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It wasn't a shitpost. I don't like the tone of the video. I said Cage is an average to good writer. He deserves criticism, but this video is edgy trash to me. Deal with it. I'm not here to engage you personally.

I'm not asking you to engage me. I'm asking you to engage and discuss the video. If you can't do that, why are you even in this thread?

The video raises a lot of good points. You've barely seen it but call it edgy trash instead of offering any rebuttals but your opinion of Cage.

So.... drive by shit posts.
 

Shodan14

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I love how there's an undying David Cage defense force with zero tolerance for any criticism.
 

Chumunga64

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I love how there's an undying David Cage defense force with zero tolerance for and criticism.

It's fucking odd! I love this forum because it doesn't tolerate a lot of bullshit like other parts of the internet does but whenever Cage engages puts out a new game that has a lot of weird racist and sexist undertones there is a lot of people defending him. What about David Cage that makes people so inclined to coddle him?

Yes, Detroit is much better than the rest of his games but there is still a lot of blatant writing problems.
 
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Nothing in the story offended me

Not even the android throwing out bottles? Michigan has a 97% recycling rate on them. And it's actually illegal to throw out containers with a deposit. Androids shouldn't be breaking the law.

Cage continues to be a hack!

Cage is not the best writer EVER, but Detroit is improved over previous efforts logically and technically.

That's not exactly setting the bar high, haha.
 
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I'm not asking you to engage me. I'm asking you to engage and discuss the video. If you can't do that, why are you even in this thread?

The video raises a lot of good points. You've barely seen it but call it edgy trash instead of offering any rebuttals but your opinion of Cage.

So.... drive by shit posts.
I told you. He offers little constructive feedback, in general his voice is annoying, and he basically had nothing good to say about anything. I don't disagree that Cage needs help being more subtle, but in general again I can't do emotional youtubers that present themselves like this.
 

Plum

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Not even the android throwing out bottles? Michigan has a 97% recycling rate on them. And it's actually illegal to throw out containers with a deposit. Androids shouldn't be breaking the law.

Cage continues to be a hack!

Maybe with the apocalyptic levels of climate change going on just off-screen everyone just gave up and went full-nihilistic? I mean, that would explain why the 40% unemployment rate, Russia-US tensions, dead bees, vlogger-as-president and plummeting birth rates don't seem to phase anyone at all throughout the game.

...either that or Quantic Dream put in a bunch of "possible future events" without thinking of the insanely massive global consequences they would have.
 
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I love how there is an undying David Cage bash force who stops responding when you refute their arguments with evidence directly from the game or proceeds to post the same argument again right after. It very much goes both ways

Not a lot of refutation for this video though or most of the points it raises. Just a couple of things here and there.

Funny how some of the other folks who were defending it in the Sony first party thread haven't shown up. Guess it's harder when it's not me alone anymore against an insulated thread.

I told you. He offers little constructive feedback, in general his voice is annoying, and he basically had nothing good to say about anything. I don't disagree that Cage needs help being more subtle, but in general again I can't do emotional youtubers that present themselves like this.

He actually did have some good things to say. But of course, you didn't watch the whole video.
 

Plum

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I love how there is an undying David Cage bash force who stops responding when you refute their arguments with evidence directly from the game or proceeds to post the same argument again right after. It very much goes both ways

I mean, maybe people aren't responding to you because all your arguments seem to be the same old "it makes sense in game so you can't criticise it," rhetoric, some of which isn't even based in fact but your view that being nice to your slaves means you're not a slave owner (because, even though you say so, the game never portrays Markus as anything but a slave).
 
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Not a lot of refutation for this video though or most of the points it raises. Just a couple of things here and there.

Funny how some of the other folks who were defending it in the Sony first party thread haven't shown up. Guess it's harder when it's not me alone anymore against an insulated thread.



He actually did have some good things to say. But of course, you didn't watch the whole video.

Who are all these imaginary people that think Cage is a great writer? I'm pretty sure some people just enjoy the overall game itself

For me this could be a ten minute video. We all know Cage is not Orwell. I'd rather more exposition be spent on saying anything good about the story besides two actors that apparently Cage just wandered into. Come on man this guy clearly has a hate boner, Cage directly worked with these actors and you can't even give him credit for THAT? BS.

I don't disagree with some points. Other minor story nitpicks just pad the video.
 
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Weiss

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I have no problem criticizing David Cage, dude is a hell of a director, but far from a great writer. However, there's also an overwhelming amount of people who 100% dismiss anything as soon as David Cage's name pops up.

The guy has never written a good game so I don't know why that's a bad thing.

The only defense I'll give him is that he has good ideas for interactive narrative fiction and his "game over is a failure of game design" statement is woefully taken out of context.
 

Transistor

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The guy has never written a good game so I don't know why that's a bad thing.

The only defense I'll give him is that he has good ideas for interactive narrative fiction and his "game over is a failure of game design" statement is woefully taken out of context.
That's where we will have to disagree. He has issues definitely, and I didn't care for Beyond, but I liked Heavy Rain well enough and I loved Detroit.

Opinions and all
 
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That's where we will have to disagree. He has issues definitely, and I didn't care for Beyond, but I liked Heavy Rain well enough and I loved Detroit.

Opinions and all
Cage to me has never written a great game, but in gaming that is hardly much of a sin. I agree with you parts of hr and detroit are very good and people hate too much sometimes.
 

Htown

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I'm not listening to 25 minutes of this dude. Cage is French, and has a good not great grasp of English and American history, themes, etc. He is getting better at what he does, and the video doesn't seem very constructive.
If you're French, and you don't have a good grasp of American history and themes, then either do some damn research, or don't make a game about a robot civil rights movement set in an American city using American civil rights imagery.

Nobody forced David Cage to make this specific game.
 

Kenzodielocke

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The only well written thing he has ever done is "The Dark Sorcerer". You know why that shit works? Because it is just comedy and I think he is maybe decent in that field rather politics. Once again, he and his team have proven how garbage they can be.

The only saving grace in Detroit: Become Human are the Connor parts, let's be real. Because it is just straight up cop drama, which gets bad too when it mixes up with the other story lines.
 

danm999

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"Blade Runner except the androids are the good guys"!?

Holy shit the term hack gets tossed around too much sometimes but Cage is a hack.

If you're French, and you don't have a good grasp of American history and themes, then either do some damn research, or don't make a game about a robot civil rights movement set in an American city using American civil rights imagery.

Nobody forced David Cage to make this specific game.

The Department Of Video Game Premises unfortunately assigned Quantic Dream a charged American sci fi racial allegory and here we are.

They were hoping to get assigned a story about a puppy and a bee who fight tooth decay through the power of friendship.
 
Mar 17, 2018
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If you're French, and you don't have a good grasp of American history and themes, then either do some damn research, or don't make a game about a robot civil rights movement set in an American city using American civil rights imagery.

Nobody forced David Cage to make this specific game.
I'm not going to disagree with you, but at least he is challenging himself and getting better. Writing for games and graphics is not easy.
 
Jan 1, 2018
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Cage is French, and has a good not great grasp of English and American history, themes, etc.
None of this makes him free to create without criticism. If he made a work that is an injustice to the history and themes its related to, regardless of whether he's overly familiar with them, it's something that is valid to criticize him for. The fact of the matter is that when every bit of the game is related to the history of racism and slavery, and it does that poorly, and when most of the game's value is in its story itself it is fair to say it's a poorly made game regardless of his nation of origin or his education on the issues he presents.
 
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None of this makes him free to create without criticism. If he made a work that is an injustice to the history and themes its related to, regardless of whether he's overly familiar with them, it's something that is valid to criticize him for. The fact of the matter is that when every bit of the game is related to the history of racism and slavery, and it does that poorly, and when most of the game's value is in its story itself it is fair to say it's a poorly made game regardless of his nation of origin or his education on the issues he presents.
The issue is more constructive criticism than anything else. This guy's opinion isn't a standard. People can feel differently on many topics. Everyone wants Cage to be some kind of high-tier novelist it seems. It's not going to happen, and almost no other writer in the industry is held to this revealing of light. Writing in general in games has just crossed the b-tier in the better games. We have a long way to go. Detroit doesn't always succeed, but it certainly has its moments.
 

danm999

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The issue is more constructive criticism than anything else. This guy's opinion isn't a standard. People can feel differently on many topics. Everyone wants Cage to be some kind of high-tier novelist it seems. It's not going to happen, and almost no other writer in the industry is held to this revealing of light. Writing in general in games has just crossed the b-tier in the better games. We have a long way to go. Detroit doesn't always succeed, but it certainly has its moments.

The video is mean but it is also constructive. It points out why the various themes Cage uses don't work; specifically it goes into why shoehorning androids into racial politics is silly.

And there are plenty of game leads who are held to higher standards in their writing and succeed mostly, examples like Avellone, Yoko Taro, John Gonzalez, Amy Hennig, Neil Druckmann, Kojima, etc.

Cage gets called out because he doesn't understand Blade Runner.
 
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Those people mentioned are few in number. Kojima of all the so-called hacks isn't much better for subtlety. I also disagree this overall is a constructive video. Not even close. He can' t even give Cage credit for his actors.
 

Weiss

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Those people mentioned are few in number. Kojima of all the so-called hacks isn't much better for subtlety. I also disagree this overall is a constructive video. Not even close. He can' t even give Cage credit for his actors.

Why would he do that?

Hell from what I've read up on a lot of the best dialogue in the game was improvised by the actors and Cage fought them over it.
 

BDubsLegend

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As someone without a dog in the fight this video is well written and delivers his points with great examples. I didn't watch earlier because I thought I might play but this video kinda seals the deal. People trying to dismiss it like some Jim Sterling level chaff are letting their fanboy get in the way of the truth. Like he said you can still enjoy the game personally but the game still fails to give important subject matter the proper weight they deserve.