Episode 704
Preliminary Outline
- I wouldn't count on Meera showing up again: "Meera stands, heartbroken. The Bran she loved died in that cave. Bran doesn't contradict her. She turns and walks out of the room out of his life, and out of the series." Also, actress Ellie Kendrick recently said she hasn't been notified about returning, and filming for Season 8 has already begun.
- Bran had a second vision montage after Littlefinger handed him the dagger, which ended with Bran seeing Jaime push him out the window:
Bran continues to gaze at the Valyrian dagger... and his eyes roll back in his head for a BRAN VISION MONTAGE:
Tyrion defending himself to CATELYN in the Vale (ep 105)
"I had nothing to do with the attempt on your son's life!"
CATELYN giving the dagger to Littlefinger and Varys (ep 103)
"There's only one dagger like this in King's Landing. It's mine."
SER RODRIK examining the dagger in the godswood (ep 102)
"The blade is Valyrian steel. The hilt dragonbone."
The ASSASSIN attempting to kill Bran with the dagger; Catelyn fighting him off; SUMMER saving the day (ep 102)
And, lastly, the final moments of episode 101. Bran stands in the tower observing the familiar scene as it plays out. He is finally able to see what happened – and who pushed him from that tower. He watches as his younger self is discovered by Jaime; watches as Jaime utters "the things I do for love"; watches as Jaime shoves him out—
- The smaller area of the dragonglass cave "can (conveniently) only fit two." Jon extended his hand to help Dany down: "She regards it for a beat – she doesn't need his help – but takes it anyway." Jon mentioned his friend Sam, saying he'd probably be able to tell them exactly what the markings on the wall mean.
- Arya wanted Bran to use his powers to find out who wanted him dead. "He calmly tells her he doesn't care who wanted him dead, because that man doesn't matter. Her list doesn't matter, Winterfell doesn't matter, House Stark doesn't matter. Only the war to come."
- Bran is described as "possibly the single most magical being on the planet."
- "Jon is surprised to see Theon, but not as much as Theon is to see Jon. From Jon's face, Theon realizes he was right not to go to Castle Black with Sansa."
- "Jon says he thought Theon died in Euron's attack, and Jon's tone says that it wasn't an unpleasant thought. Theon acknowledges he should have died, but here he is. Story of his life."
- At the Loot Train Battle there were half a dozen ballistas in addition to Bronn's. Drogon immediately clawed the arrow away once he was hit.
- The battle was staged on and around a bridge, "the only one across the river for miles." Jaime saw the tail end of the train was lost, so "He circles the remaining wagons around the entrance to the bridge, like Old West settlers against the Apaches."
- "Jaime and Bronn know they're fucked. Thanks to the Dothraki and Dany, the loot train on one side of the bridge is a morass of burning wagons and screaming men. But like the Viking who held Stamford Bridge against the Saxons, Jaime is determined to buy the wagons behind them enough time to get into the city."
- Drogon blasted the wagon cordon apart, letting the Dothraki in. Jaime and Bronn fell back to the center of the bridge, but Drogon landed on the other side. "The Lannisters have a choice: Dothraki, or dragon. The smart soldiers dive into the Blackwater River. The smarter soldiers do so and know how to swim. The smartest soldiers realize that knowing how to swim and being able to swim in armor are two different things, and surrender."
- Jaime and Dany locked eyes. Dany "can guess who he is: the man who stabbed her father in the back." Behind Dany, Jaime saw the last wagons heading toward the city, so to keep Dany from turning her attention to them, he charged at her as a distraction. "Drogon opens his toothy maw and coils back. No flame, he wants some Lannister tartare." Bronn tackled Jaime over the side of the bridge, the rapids rushing them away as Bronn held them underwater. Drowned men floated alongside them, and Jaime saw living soldiers trapped on the riverbed by their armor, "beseeching him for a help he can't give, as they drown."
(Note: Throughout the battle there's a note beneath the scene headings saying "[BRIDGE ELEMENT TO BE REMOVED IN FORTHCOMING REVISIONS]")
- As Tyrion witnessed this, it's mentioned that "He loves Dany, he wants her to win the Iron Throne." There are later hints that this outline was aiming for romantic love more than platonic love.
Episode Summary
- "Arrows whiz towards Dany, Drogon belly rolls to protect her - the arrows bouncing off of his scales like Nerf darts." Some people wondered if Dany was responsible for Drogon's defensive maneuver or if Drogon did that on his own. In this summary at least it was the latter.
- It's specified that reloading the scorpion is "a job for two men" (not that this stops Bronn from reloading in time of course).
- "Dany can tell that the bolt hit Drogon in a place that hasn't done any real damage."
- "Jaime can see this happening and realizes that they are just a few hundred yards away, distracted and vulnerable. He could win this war in a single run. The elegiac shots make one thing clear to us: one of our favorite characters is about to die. But which one?"
Episode 705
Preliminary Outline
- Bronn questioned how Jaime was planning on killing a dragon. Jaime said by stabbing it through the eye and into its brain, or by cutting its throat with his Valyrian steel sword.
- Tyrion tried to persuade Randyll by pointing out that he fought for Dany's father during the Rebellion, and handed Robert his only defeat. Randyll echoed a line from Ned in S1, saying: "I'm a soldier. I learned how to die a long time ago."
- An interesting transition:
The Bad News Ravens take flight from Winterfell for every corner of the Seven Kingdoms. And we go from a raven's wing...
... to a dragon's wing, as Drogon brings Dany back to Dragonstone.
- Jon had an encounter with all three dragons:
Jon watches Dany and Drogon wheeling in the sky, approaching their Dragonstone landing pad. Behind him, Rhaegal leaps down to meet his mother and brother, landing too close to Jon. Viserion joins him. They notice Jon, and meet his gaze.
The two dragons close in on Jon, trying to decide what to make of him: friend? Foe? Meal? Jon stands his ground, staring into Rhaegal's eye. Rhaegal appears to be leaning toward the latter. But Drogon lands with Dany on his back, and the other dragons make way for him as he approaches Jon and leans in to sniff him.
Every nerve in Jon's body screams to run, but instead he sticks out his hand, and touches the creature's muzzle.
Drogon decides Jon is OK. A look from Drogon brings each of his brothers around to the same opinion.
Impressed, Dany dismounts. "You didn't run."
"Didn't think I'd get very far."
- I don't quite know what to make of this Jon/Dany conversation:
This leads into a scene with Dany and Jon. On screen or off screen, she gives him a censored version of the events on the Kingsroad, leaving out the part about roasting the Tarlys alive. She only tells him that many former Lannister loyalists lined up behind their rightful Queen, hint hint. Half-joking, Dany points out that, for one, she has dragons. Let's be honest, if this whole Army of the Dead is as flammable as they say, whoever has the fire-breathing dragons should probably be Queen. Jon laughs. He doesn't think the throne should go to the person with the most dragons, necessarily. Why not? she wants to know. Dragons are magic. People like magic. A big part of the reason they named Jon King in the North was because he was magic. Jon protests; that wasn't the reason. But Dany keeps needling him. "Admit it. People like you because you're magic." "I'm not magic." "You are! Rising from the dead is magic, and you rose from the dead. Allegedly." "What?" "I never saw you rise from the dead. Lots of people saw me walk from the flames unburned. More than once, actually. But this 'rising from the dead'... it was a very private affair."
Jon offers to show her the scars. She sure wouldn't mind seeing them – but she doesn't take the bait. It's cold out. She wouldn't want him to get sick.
Jon calls her "Dany", without any of her numerous titles. And she's a little taken aback, but also likes it. "No one's ever called me that before." "I'm sorry, it's just... well, Daenerys is a mouthful."
I'm not sure if this was meant to be serious dialogue or if whoever wrote this was just having some fun. In the Preliminary Outline for 702, Mel did tell Dany that Jon had been resurrected, but there was nothing more on this in the outlines for 703 and 704, which weren't much different from the aired episodes where Mel didn't mention that. So the above dialogue in 705 feels very out of place.
Perhaps in an earlier draft Jon and Dany had become much closer by this point, and the Jon/Dany stuff in 703 and 704 had since been rewritten, but not the stuff in 705 yet, nor the mention of the resurrection in 702.
- "And up the beach comes Jorah, seeing Dany with yet another handsome fellow who's not Jorah."
- Dany trying to prevent Jon from going on the wight hunt: "Jon's and Dany's argument has the undertone of a woman trying to keep her man from venturing into harm's way, a fact not lost on Jorah or Tyrion."
"Jon brings Davos around to his way of seeing things, even as Davos bemoans his own fate as the Hand of a King who seems hell-bent on killing himself. Eventually, Dany realizes that Jon is going no matter what she says, and she can't help but respect him for it."
- Ebrose told Sam about the death of his father:
Sam knows he has lost. These fucking guys. As he's about to leave, the Archmaester calls out to Sam: "Heard the Targaryen girl burnt your father alive. Horrible thing, horrible thing. Where's that book you were getting for me?"
- "In the Forbidden Works section, Sam grabs as many scrolls as he can. The Librarian from 610 (or another maester) tries to stop him but Samwell Tarly killed a Thenn and a White Walker, and shoves the dork out of the way."
- "Davos wants to know for which side Gendry intended to fight. Gendry's not sure: they all seem pretty horrible. Davos agrees, but he's found the least horrible of them. His king might even be a great one – if Gendry cares to fight for the right side? Gendry grabs his hammer and helm. No need to ask twice."
- Glover and Royce talking to Sansa: "She has done a fine job, as would be expected of Ned Stark's trueborn daughter, while Jon Snow followed his brother's course and took off with a foreign woman."
- Gendry may be the future of House Baratheon: "Gendry's true parentage would actually matter to the people at Dragonstone. After all, with Stannis dead, who is now Lord Baratheon? Who is lord of Storm's End?"
- Jon and Dany's beach farewell: "Jon and Dany have to say a private goodbye in a public space."
"Dany hopes it works. If it doesn't, Jon asks them all to try to convince Cersei anyway. He doesn't matter, his life doesn't matter, this is all that matters. Dany is moved by his selflessness."
- "Cersei doesn't believe the ridiculous raven they just got from Winterfell about the Army of the Dead. Like Stalin getting reports of 3 million Nazis massing on his western border, she assumes it's all enemy propaganda meant to trick her."
- "Cersei doesn't care about the public. She doesn't care about anything but Jaime, and this little life growing inside her. After all, the public accepted Targaryen brother-sister marriages for centuries. They will do as they please, and the little people will get used to it."
- The Brotherhood arrived at Eastwatch after Jon and Co. explained the mission to Tormund. "Tormund is not happy to have another red priest up in their business, but Jon convinces them that the more red shirts in their party, the better."
- "The gate to the tunnel is raised. Our band of brave, if hostile, warriors passes through the Wall, heading into the Great Wight North."
Episode Summary
- After Dany dismounts Drogon in front of Jon: "He watches her watching her dragons and wishes that he could keep looking at her and forget about the world events weighing on his shoulders."
- "When Jorah says goodbye to Dany she tells him that he's now Lord Commander of the Queensguard."
- "Jon and Dany say their goodbyes and Dany tells Jon that she admires what he's doing, it's reckless and foolish but she admires it."
Episode 706
Preliminary Outline
Note: The outline for this episode is kind of a mess compared to the others. It was clearly in the middle of being revised. Many of the scenes beyond the Wall have a note beneath the scene heading saying "[FORTHCOMING REVISIONS WILL SEE" followed by a list of changes to be made. Sometimes these changes have
already been made to the outline (but not always consistently from scene to scene), sometimes they haven't, and sometimes stuff to be removed is still in there but it's been struck out, like so. So it's somewhat of a mishmash of different versions of the plot. Keep that in mind.
- Brienne and Pod were originally on the wight hunt. Beneath the very first scene heading there's a note saying "[BRIENNE AND POD CUT FROM SCENE IN FORTHCOMING REVISIONS]". They aren't mentioned in the first scene where everyone just talks, but they do appear from the wight bear scene onward, although their names are crossed out.
- Jon and Beric: "They also discuss how pieces of you get chipped away with every resurrection. Jon doesn't want that."
- Gendry and the Hound: "They can also talk about Arya."
- Originally, Jon wasn't part of the wight hunt, and Brienne was wounded by the bear instead of Thoros. The note beneath the second scene heading reads: "[FORTHCOMING REVISIONS WILL SEE JON ADDED TO THIS SCENE AND BRIENNE AND POD CUT. THOROS WILL BE WOUNDED BY THE BEAR RATHER THAN BRIENNE, THOUGH HIS INJURIES WILL NOT BE AS SEVERE.]"
- Plot armor: "A truly terrifying fight ensues, in which a non-player or two gets killed, but not so many as to call attention to the slightly silly fact that none of our principals are going to die in this episode."
- Tyrion and Dany didn't talk about heroes or Jon's love for her.
- The group reached a vantage point where they saw the entire Army of the Dead standing still in a valley, including "more White Walkers than we've ever seen before."
- Benjen helped Gendry make it to Eastwatch:
Gendry is running for Eastwatch but is exhausted and freezing, and finally slips and collapses in the cold. A set of horse hooves enter frame, and Coldhands carries him to Eastwatch fast. Then Coldhands heads back to the battle.
Gendry comes tearing into Eastwatch, half dead. BORCAS with his carbuncle-nose asks him what happened, but he doesn't have time for exposition. "Get the Maester. We need to send a raven.
"BORCAS with his carbuncle-nose" is a reference to
a Maester Aemon line from S1E7: "Dareon, we are sending you to Eastwatch. Present yourself to Borcas when you arrive. Make no comment about his nose."
- The scene where Sansa sends Brienne away is still here. Evidently this would have been added in after they decided to cut Brienne from the wight hunt.
- It's heavily implied the Night King set a trap:
The Night King smiles at them, turns and walks away. It's hard to shake the feeling that he's one step ahead of them.
- Jon rode Viserion in a previous draft:
6.16 EXT. FROZEN LAKE – DAY
[FORTHCOMING REVISIONS WILL SEE BRIENNE, POD AND GENDRY CUT AND JON ADDED TO SCENE. JON WILL NOT FLY VISERION IN THE NEXT DRAFT.]
Unfortunately this is one of the instances where these revisions have already been made to the outline, so there are no further mentions of Jon riding Viserion. They've already been edited out. However there is a passage later on which I think might be a remnant of that draft, which I will address in a bit.
- Jorah and Tormund tried walking across the largely refrozen ice to the shore to fight their way out. The Hound said he'd stay behind to watch over Brienne, but Brienne urged him to help the others. "Brienne has resigned herself to dying on this island." Jorah fell through the ice, but climbed out. Learning from Jorah and Tormund, the wights started heading onto the ice too, towards Jorah. That is when Dany came to the rescue.
- "Jon sees the Night King emerge from the Army of the Dead. Come at Me, Bro, v2."
- Viserion crashing into the lake also caused Jon to fall in:
Viserion crashes into the lake, shattering the ice beneath Jon's feet and taking him into the water.
Dany witnesses this with horror, along with the other survivors. She watches the water from above, and sees no sign of life from either Jon or Viserion.
- Jon and Benjen fought White Walkers together, and the Night King cut Benjen in half:
Jon tries to be Hardhome Jon, or Battle of the Bastards Jon. But he doesn't have the strength. And five White Walkers are approaching him, surrounding him. They are going to tear him to pieces.
Coldhands rides in to the rescue. Together he and Jon dispatch the immediate Walker danger. They have a very brief, very touching moment, with very limited Coldhands dialogue. There's just no time for that now. He throws Jon up onto his horse, tells him to ride for the pass, and slaps the horse onward. The horse plows through several wights, knocking them to pieces in the process – and Coldhands turns to find the Night King coming for him. The Night King cuts him in half.
- I think this may be a remnant of the previous draft where Jon rode Viserion:
Dany looks to the sky along with Drogon. No Viserion. But coming over the horizon, a lone horse, with Jon slumped in the saddle. Simultaneously, she feels great joy and great sorrow. She knows what this means, and Drogon knows it too. He screams an anguished cry for his lost brother.
I suspect that in that draft, Jon would have hopped on Viserion when Dany came to the rescue, but the Night King speared him as they tried to fly away and they both crashed into the lake together (which was revised to Viserion shattering the ice beneath Jon's feet in this draft of the outline). Dany would have seen this ("Dany witnesses this with horror, along with the other survivors. She watches the water from above, and sees no sign of life from either Jon or Viserion"), so when she saw Jon returning, but on a horse, not a dragon, she knew Viserion was dead. At least, I
think that's what the above paragraph was trying to convey.
- While Jon was still sleeping, Dany moved the furs aside to see his scars. When he woke up she said "No one could survive that" and Jon replied "I didn't."
- Dany severely regretted rescuing them, and wished she could take it all back to save her dragon, a complete contrast to the aired episode.
- After Jon pledges to Dany: "Jon thinks they'll understand. The ones who know him know he never really wanted to be king anyway."
- The chain used to drag Viserion is "older than living memory, forged thousands of years ago for some forgotten purpose."
Episode Summary
- "Jon continues to kill wights on the ground and Dany watches, impressed."
- The Night King summoned a blizzard with his hand:
We see Jon's sword, then a hand comes up out of the water and Jon is alive, alone to face the Night King and the wights when the same dark figure on horseback that brought Gendry to Eastwatch appears. We come to realize this is Jon's Uncle Benjen. The Night King is standing by watching the fighting with his arms at his sides. He then opens one hand and the snow on the ground beneath his hand begins to swirl and churn, encompassing him in his own personal blizzard and he disappears from sight while the storm continues to grow. Uncle Benjen and Jon can't see more than three feet in front of them. Benjen throws Jon on top of his horse along with his sword, Longclaw, and tells Jon to ride for the pass.
- Benjen picked up a White Walker's sword, but the Night King stabbed him through the heart and chopped off his head:
The Night King appears again and Benjen takes a fallen White Walker's sword, going to meet his end. Jon looks back from the horse and we see everything from his perspective. Benjen tries to fight but the Night King punches his blade into his chest, through his heart and out the other side, pulling the blade out and Benjen's body drops to the ground. The Night King then takes off Benjen's head. Jon turns back around and rides through the mountain pass.
- Dany openly cried in her talk with Jon.
- "Jon sees her beauty, strength, grief and pain and all push him to the realization that he loves her and he's thrown by the realization. Her fingers move on his hand and she likes the way it feels. A look between them acknowledges what almost just happened, she stares at him a moment longer, stands and leaves the cabin."
Episode 707
Preliminary Outline
- Euron had cordoned off the mouth of the Blackwater with a chain, and he looked at Dany's flagship for a tense moment before allowing them to pass. "The special smile Euron gives Theon reminds Theon what it feels like to want to cut out someone's throat."
- Qyburn suggested that Dany might fly in with her dragons and kill everyone at the Dragonpit, allies and enemies alike. Cersei was confident that wouldn't happen though because Dany has a reputation to maintain as "the Breaker of Chains" and all that.
- Bronn teased Tyrion about being attracted to Dany:
Bronn recounts seeing Dany on the Kingsroad. Quite a woman. Almost turned Jaime into charcoal. Tyrion tries to tell Bronn that Dany is the best chance they have to make the next hundred years different from the last hundred. Bronn is surprised to find Tyrion buying into her cult of personality. Meet the new boss, same as the old boss.
"She was nice to look at, though, from what I could make out while she was roasting us alive. Have any luck with her?"
Tyrion's expression protests. "Don't pretend with me," Bronn says. "I know what you like." Bronn looks over his shoulder at Jon Snow. "Handsome brooder. Dragon Queen fucking him yet? No? Bet she will be soon. He's what they go for. Him and your brother. Not us. We're never the one they go for. We're the other one."
It's sure shitty to be the other one. Bronn catches sight of Jorah. Tyrion tells Bronn who he is, reminding him that Jorah started out informing on Dany for Robert. "And now he's just like you. Soon she'll have a whole string of you, following her around like baby ducks."
- "As Dany takes her seat opposite Cersei in the circle, Bronn gives Tyrion a parting piece of advice: "You're better off not wanting a girl like that. A girl like that is not manageable." "
- When Jon says he's already pledged to Dany "she gets that look on her face that we haven't seen since Drogo told her he was going to sail to Westeros and kill the men in their iron suits."
- "A part of Dany really wishes Jon hadn't gone public that way. And a part of her is glad he did. Loyalty has always turned her on."
- The Hound was more straightforward in his threat to the Mountain, saying "You're not dead yet, are you, brother? Good. I want to kill you myself."
- "More importantly, Jon and Dany can have a good, romantically-tense scene in a quiet corner of the dragon pit."
- "When the meeting ends, Theon asks if he can speak to Jon alone. Jon asks for Dany's permission to do so. Dany grants it. She has some things she'd like to discuss with Jon later, privately. Exit Dany."
- After Jaime left, Cersei had a final scene heavily implying she miscarried:
And back in the Red Keep, Cersei wakes in the night. Something is wrong. She gets out of bed, grabs a lantern and sees that her nightgown is soaked in blood, the bedsheets soaked in blood. She screams, and the scream echoes from the top of the highest tower of the Red Keep.
This was in the leaks from before Season 7 too, which were from someone who had access to an actual script from shortly before filming (you can read the leaker's comments about that scene
here). So has this been cut, or just moved to next season? It would make for a nice contrast if Cersei miscarried around the same time Dany learned she was pregnant.
- Rhaegar and Lyanna: "The two kiss, hopeful newlyweds who truly believe this will all work out."
- "Jon walks into Dany's cabin below decks, knowing exactly what he wants and what she wants."
- Tyrion's reaction to Jon and Dany:
We pull away from Dany's cabin door, back down the corridor. At the far end, Tyrion emerges from the stairway. He hears the muffled sounds of what's going on behind Dany's closed door.
Looking troubled for more reasons than one, Tyrion turns away, enters his own cabin, and shuts the door behind him.
Between the "loves Dany" comment in 704, Tyrion noting Dany's feelings for Jon in 705, Tyrion not teasing Dany about Jon's love for her in 706, Bronn poking fun at Tyrion's attraction to Dany and comparing him to Jorah in 707, and the above, it seems like this outline was going for more of a romantic jealousy angle with Tyrion.
- "Emerging from the frozen coastal forest, the Army of the Dead comes in force. All of them, with the White Walkers bringing up the rear. All of them too. How many White Walkers? Let's say 150. This is bad"
- "But then a stranger sound comes from the north. Tormund looks to the sky, and sees a mote on the horizon, coming in fast. Very fast. We've never seen a dragon going full speed before. It's moving so fast we don't get a clear look at it or the Night King on its back before it is upon us..."
- Viserion breathes "blue flame"/"blue fire" and is described as an "ice dragon."
- There was some question as to whether Viserion was a wight dragon or a White Walker dragon. On the one hand, Viserion was raised from the dead like a wight, but on the other, the Night King touched him like he did to Craster's son. Interestingly, the outline actually does draw a comparison to Craster's sons:
A massive chunk of the Wall breaks free ahead of Tormund. The ice dragon glides away, and we get our first clear look at him, and at the Night King on his back. He's done the same thing to Viserion that he did to Craster's sons. Only those were babies, and this is a dragon.
Does this have unique implications for the story though? Or is it just a catchy description without a lot of thought put behind it? I'm leaning towards the latter, personally, but it's something to think about.
Episode Summary
- "Cersei notices Jaime looking at Brienne and asks who invited her - Brienne replies she is there on behalf of Sansa. Cersei notices the lion's head on the pommel of her sword but before Jaime or Brienne can explain this, Drogon and Rhaegal appear overhead"
- "They decide the Unsullied need training in the winter/snow and they will sail to Eastwatch to Tormund. Davos says they already have thousands of dragonglass spearheads prepared."